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Rainbows and Metaphors

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Wheatart
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A Crimson
                Trickle
                           Drips to the
Tangerine          
               Petal
                        Fluttering into the
Golden              
           Sun
                   That falls on the
Emerald
              Blades
                          That cascade into the
Azure
           Ocean
                       Spilling into the
Indigo
           Plane
                    Resting on the
Pale
              Violet
                        night.
               
This is my entry for :iconannissina:'s rainbow contest! I would definitely love some advice to help me improve the idea. Any comments and critiques are appreciated!
Here's the news article: [link]
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wibbie
Hmmmm.... can you use my picture, my dear? I guess so.... since you've already got it there! LOL