Stylistically Challenged: 1

This is some work from last year, but I figured I might as well upload it, right?
I was going for a film noir style, and there can be some words, but next time I'll need to plan for text.

Let me know how easy/hard it is to understand what's happening.
Next: fav.me/d72r86l

I'm trying to think of what they might say (I might have had it written down somewhere, then lost it) and if there was any text on this page, it would be in the last panel.
Tara: You have no sense of 'private property', do you?